Thursday 1 November 2012


The Scary Rusty shed


LT:To write a story opener to hook in the reader.

 



THERE WAS AN OLD SHED AT THE BACK OF OUR FLOWER GARDEN. MY BROTHER KNEW THAT A GOBLIN LIVED IN IT. A SMALL CROOKED GREEN BODY THAT ATTACKED PEOPLE IF THEY GO IN THE SHED. THE NEXT DAY  ME AND JAKE MY FRIEND AND MY DAD MICHAEL TOOK A LOOK. SQUEEK! SQUEEK! WENT THE RUSTY TIN DOOR. WE WENT WITH A TORCH AND A BASEBALL BAT.  WE TIP TOED IN AND WE WENT AND LOOKED FOR THE CREATURE. SUDDENLY MY DAD TURNED HIS HEAD AND THERE WAS THE GOBLIN STARING RIGHT AT HIM.  HIS TWO RED EYES WERE AS RED AS BLOOD. HE HAD YELLOW SLIME DRIPPING ALL OVER HIM.  THE GOBLIN WAS AS SMALL AS A CHILD ... TO BE CONTINUED.


1 comment:

  1. Did you mean a Argyll monster It scared our class at Glen Innes primary school. Hi my name is moko and I have read your story and it is so so awesome.
    From moko.

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