We are a year 6/7 class at Glenbrae School in Auckland, New Zealand. We are sharing our learning through our class blog. We live locally and learn globally.
Thursday 23 February 2012
Rhino
Rhinos are very important to the earth because they are nearly extinct because some people only kill the rino to take their horn off and sell it to get over a 5,000,000 million dollars.
Hi, there. I think you used a word and used it straight away (Witch is "Because" ) next time maybe you could find more info. It's good ya used a comma after those "zeros." Keep up the good work! I hope you appreciate my comment on your work.
Rhinos are very important to the earth because they are nearly extinct because some people only kill the rino to take their horn off and sell it to get over a 5,000,000 million dollars.
Hi, there.
ReplyDeleteI think you used a word and used it straight away (Witch is "Because" ) next time maybe you could find more info. It's good ya used a comma after those "zeros." Keep up the good work! I hope you appreciate my comment on your work.
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Nicola